Poem

So, this is the first poem I've ever written that rhymes. And it also doesn't suck. :) At least, I don't think so, especially compared to my other poems. I might tweak it a bit more, but here's the first draft:


Dancing and twirling, you spin me around
I smile with joy for the love that I’ve found.
Thinking you cared the way that you said
I never dreamed it one day would end.

Now as I look back, I see the fun times.
Dancing and cuddling, it was simply sublime.
You were there when I needed you, till that fateful day
When you decided to go away.

What happened to you? Where did you go?
Where is that boy I used to know?
He slid away, in the blink of an eye
Leaving me with hardly a goodbye.




Oh, it is currently nameless. Any ideas?